The biggest thing I learned while writing Rebellion is about characterization. Previously, I thought characterization meant having a unique voice, a p...ersonality, and having interesting things happen. I’m now much more aware of the need to both make characters somewhat relatable, and do have a character arc or story separate from the main narrative. This is going to be the main thing I work on during Elfish Descent. As an example, I am really not very satisfied with how the Katerei and Gorath. .. that we just needed to have patience. I don’t know why Tuesdays became the night Donny and I always made love. It just did, somehow. He needed sex, of course, and more than just once a week. So did I, really. Everyone needs to feel that release ... that intimacy. And I never refused him, but we still only did it on Tuesdays, because ... well ... he never insisted that we do it more often. And ... I think that he enjoyed it. I mean, he always came inside me. I almost came once. I mean, I got. I sat down on our threadbare couch and opened my laptop, making my way to Netflix. If all else fails, Netflix will always take your mind off a guy. Lost in the fifth Children of the Corn, I didn’t hear Max unlock our door and tiptoe in. ‘Hey,’ he said. Startled, I looked around and took out my headphones. ‘Hey. How was your date?’ I tried to keep the acid out of my voice. ‘Eh. Okay. She’s nice, though.’ I made a small noise of acknowledgment and tossed him the bag of chips. ‘Throw that in the. "I couldn't help but blush at her remark. For some reason, even though I was embarrassed at the idea of one of Vicki's men being linked to she and I having a private intimate sexual moment, the way Dr. Judy characterized it caused my prick to pulse. Apparently it aroused me for some reason."Victor, now you're going to go in the sound proof video booth and watch a short video. We'll discuss it afterwards. You're to still stay exposed but not ejaculate as you play with yourself in the booth..