) There’s a great number of stories on here that clearly learned how to write sex scenes by reading other sex stories, then swapped names and maybe ...if the reader is lucky, changed a few mannerisms of the characters. Worse, they might think that a character is defined by one trait (like ‘bossy,’ ‘childish’ or ‘nympho’), or maybe even just a word they use a lot, like ‘jeepers.’ The better writers make their characters less flat, by maybe daring to have more than one trait to their personality.. .“Ich griff ihre Beine und zog sie abrupt bis zum Hintern an die Schreibtischkante vor mir.Einige Blätter wehten zu Boden.Sie zuckte mit den Beinen, aber mein starker Griff ließ keine Gegenwehr zu.„Wenn du nicht augenblicklich damit aufhörst, dann knalle ich dir nicht nur eine, sondern schmeiß dich endgültig raus!“ drohte ich mit eindeutigem grimmigem Blick.Das wirkte.Sie schloss die Augen und fügte sich wimmernd in ihr Schicksal.Ich schob ihren Rock hoch und legte meinen feuchten Pimmel auf. Daddy already had his cock out and forced me back on my knees to suck it in the middle of the club. I sucked it all until I gagged and couldn't breathe. Then Daddy picked me up, bent me over the stage, and fucked me right there for all to watch. He grabbed my hair lifting my head up so everyone could watch my tits bounce up and down as he fucked me. He slapped my face and told me to yell out how I loved his cock fucking me. I had a crowd around me as they watched him pound my pussy raw. Then he. No time to wait, he slipped his shield onto his left arm, spear in his right hand, and walked beside Chimera. “So let’s follow your nose, and go on the offensive.”“You wish to spring their trap?” Chimera said.“Yeap. We have a secret weapon.”“ ... which is?”Darian motioned to Medusa beside him. Both the giant and the serpent raised a brow, and Darian smirked.“They’ve never seen what Medusa can really do, they’ve only heard the stories. If it comes to it, Medusa can jump in, same as she did with.
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