But the main reason I asked him to proofread this story was to give me the guy’s perspective and to judge the heat factor. I also wanted to make sur...e it didn’t drag on. If a story is going to be lengthy, I want it to be worth the time it takes to read it!He finished reading and smiled at me, “Excellent story!”I grinned shyly, “Is it hot enough? Is it too long?”He looked at me like he wanted to devour me. “Not too long at all,” he answered.“Okay, good, but is it hot enough?” I asked again.“Do. “I believe we should,” Athena finally said after going over to Crnnch and examining him closely.“John, could your team escort Athena and Crnnch to this estate,” Roxanne ordered. “I then want you to return to the temple complex and have a root around in the Most High’s quarters, specifically his library and retrieve the books there for study and to be kept as a history of their race, once we’ve ascertained what’s true, what’s lies and what is wishful thinking.”“Yes, Mage Roxanne,” I formally. Just then , I heard a knock on the door of my stall. “It’s taken!” I yelled. Persistent, he knocked again. What the hell does this guy want? I thought. I wemt ahead and turned off the water as I reached for my towel. It was then that I realized I had left it on the counter. Fuck... I thought. I went to open the door slowly as I saw him standing there looking back at me. My eyes looked down at his hard erect cock. It was big. Bigger than mine to be exact. But I looked back up at him and asked. But I feel somewhat less slutty knowing that in all those experiences, alcohol was a factor. We were in a neighborhood sports bar watching the world series I think. He had worked me up and I was loving all the attention his friends were giving me. He had tricked me, to get me there just wearing an old short sun dress I like to lounge around the house in. He showed up at my doorstep just after I had gotten home from work and rushed me to go out and watch the game at the sportsbar near the mall..