We arrived at the suite at about 7:00 pm, and saw that Carlos was there with a black client. Carlos greeted us warmly and then took me over to him say...ing, “Jim, I’d like to introduce you to Wendell. He’s an auto executive and just arrived today, and I’d like you to handle his account. So please get acquainted and find out what type of home he desires. Maybe you can start showing him some properties on the MLS website. I’m just going to talk with Christine before some of our other clients. The driver pulled away from the curb and seemed determined to roll over every bump and through each pothole he came upon. Each was a vivid reminder of the evening's activities and had him squirming in his seat."Is this the place”? The driver's heavy mid-eastern accent shocked Michael out of his reverie."Yeah," he replied absentmindedly and got out of the cab. Michael briefly considered going into the tavern where they met for a nightcap but quickly changed his mind. It would never be the same. Constructive criticism for part 2! There is nothing in this empty house. This quiet house. Let me introduce myself. My name is Caleb, Im nineteen. My girlfriends name is Ally, and she is 18. Her birthday was two weeks ago, as mine was seven months ago. Ally and I decided to move into a house together. Allys dad finally let her after I had to show him how good I was for her. Her father made me do a lot of things, like, I had to be able to buy a car, have a reasonable job, and more importantly. Christina thanked him--it was more chivalry than she was used to--and she sat."Ow!" she exclaimed and shot back off the chair. Something sharp had poked her in the ass. She looked down at the seat and saw nothing but the cushion. She looked accusingly at the mediator."It poked me!" she said."Oh my!" he exclaimed. "I'm so sorry! Did one of the upholstery nails work loose?"He closely examined the chair, running his hand over it. Christina stood watching, confused. It seemed so warm in the office.