(You can add pictures of your opponent as well for more immersion for your readers) Describe your opponent and then make 2 more chapters. A. Your char...acter wins. And B. Your character loses.In the chapter "your character wins", describe the fight a little bit and then follow up with 2 more chapters: what does your character do to the loser. A. Fucks/humiliates him or her. And B. Lets him/her go. You can ignore the option B as this is a porn story, but it gives some more choice to the reader. . I bribe, reward, and distract him with other women, so I can get it on with other men. Well ... and other women, since I’m bi. That helps with threesomes, trust me on that. I still love dick best, though, and gang-bangs ... pulling trains ... yeah, that’s all for me. But, yeah, if you’re asking me which of us is in control of the marriage, it’s me.“Joe’s a much older man and he counts his lucky stars to have a pretty young wife like me, so he dotes on me and basically just lets me have my way. I’m prepared. But the gravity of what we’re doing is really hitting me right now. A lifetime commitment!”“And that bump in Jennifer’s belly? THAT wasn’t a lifetime commitment?” Jessica said with a grin.“Well, yeah,” I chuckled. “Though in eighteen years he’ll be responsible for himself!”“That doesn’t end your commitment and you know it!” Jessica said.“I know.”“And I thought you believed in giving kids responsibility as soon as they could handle it!”“I do,” I said. “I expect my kids to mostly. I thought I would walk over to make sure she hadn't fallen or something like that. I walked in (I have a key), called out her name so that I wouldn't scare her, but no answer. I still wasn't too concerned, as I know she can't hear very well. I heard the shower running, so I peeked in. There she was, taking a shower. I was relieved not to find her on the floor.I did, however, notice one thing, Her body. Considering her age, it was in pretty damn good shape. I know most people will think this is.