Ni diyamaine uss k soft gulabi hont par apne hont rakh diye toh uss k hont bht garamthe usse kiss karne k baad maine uss se pucha ki kaisa laga toh us...s ne kaha kacha laga toh mai usse phir se kiss karne laga aur sath mai uss k boobs dabanelaga aur vo bhi meri kiss ko respond karne lagi toh mai uss ki shirt utarnelaga aur shirt utar k mai uss k boobs bra k upar se dabane aur chusne lagamaujhe bht maza aa raha tha aur maine jabi uss ki bra utarde aur uss kboobs itne soft malai jase mai satve. Im going to take a few chapters to develop the characters, and this story will rely much more heavily on scene-setting, internal narration, and character development than your average erotica story. I realize this may not be the ideal site for such a story, but even so, I would love to hear feedback and criticism regarding my story and writing. Vodka Out- Introduction Tom glanced at my computer screen, settling his big hands over my shoulders. I tilted my head back to catch his expression, he. As he pushed forward, my flesh moved aside to allow him to move even deeper. I felt as if I were inching a fireman's pole into my ass."There," he said between big grins, "I knew you could take it all. Finally, I found you."What he said really hadn't registered. I focused on the incredible fullness in my ass. I closed my eyes as he again moved in short strokes. Each stroke, however, became longer and his breathing grew shallower. I felt his silky hair on the back of my legs as he tucked them on. Regardless, his eyes were immediately drawn to her cleavage, a deep valley of flesh that was in no way concealed by her bathing suit top. Not quite a bikini top... At forty-seven you just can't wear what you did at twenty-five. Now can you, ladies?"Nice tits, Shelia. How about a peek?" Sure, stud. In the bathroom ok?" She was laughing a bit as she squeezed by him through the bathroom door. Her breasts rubbed against his chest. Charlie's eyes never left her bosom."Was that cheap thrill or what,.