He saw my smile and started to smile back. "You are good" I said."I have had some practice" But I am better" I sat up, put my hand on his chest and pu...shed him back on the bed. As he fell back, drops from the cum-spit mixture flung on his stomach. I stuck my tongue out and licked it all off of his stomach. I then grabbed the base of his cock with my thumb and index finger. My fingers barely touched around the base. I rolled my fingers up toward the head so that the cum-spit mixture collected in. I would like as much feedback as possible. Don't be afraid to lay hard on me what you think and how bad my writing is!I would add i think i improve a lot from about chapter 5 and beyond hope you can stay with me till there! Enjoy the story please!25/12 Edit: I went trough this chapter once again to improve my punctuation and some of my mistakes.Josh was sleeping nicely after having masturbated to some futa stories he had read on the internet, in his dreams that night, something special. Ellen threw her head back. He pushed harder. He pushed faster and faster until he grasped her hips with his hands and cried out as the first shot of hot white cream spewed from the head of his shaft and exploded inside of her. Ellen felt the heat of his cream penetrate her folds causing her to erupt in her own orgasm calling out his name as she did. Tom shot another stream of cream inside her. It was his name that she called out as wave after wave of her orgasmic juices spilled on his shaft.. Much to his dismay, the rabbit is the Easter Bunny, and he is DEAD.The driver feels so awful that he begins to cry. A beautiful blonde woman driving down the highway sees a man crying on the side of the road and pulls over. She steps out of the car and asks the man what's wrong."I feel terrible!" He explains, "I accidentally hit the Easter Bunny with my car and KILLED HIM."The blonde says, "Don't worry."She runs to her car and pulls out a spray can. She walks over to the limp, dead Easter.