’ ‘Ah…thanks,’ he said. ‘Um, is there stuff I could, you know, change, that might make it better?’ Lois didn’t have a lot of editorial e...xperience, but she had noticed some areas where his grammar was clumsy and some of his phrasing could stand a little tuning up. ‘There isn’t a lot I’d change,’ she said. ‘You’re one of those rare people who are able to write the way they talk,’ she said. ‘That’s really a gift. But I think it…’ she went on to point out some of the areas in the parts she’d read. Aur fir dono uth kar kapade pahnane lage to chacha bole ‘Kal se haweli par aaja.Tuje ab roz chodunga’ to Maa boli ‘ Aap jab chahe,jitna chahe muje chodiye’ Aur fir Maa ko chacha ne chuma aur bahar ki taraf chal diya.Uske baad Lalaji Maa ko roz apni biwi ki tarha ragar ragar ke chodta tha.Phir do char week ke baad ek baar school se jab mein jaldi aaya toh maine dekha ki hamarehi ghar mein dono ki chudai chalu. Maine dekha ki Lalaji mummy ko apne goodh me bitha kar mummy ka hont chumrahe he,aur. ..Some of them said that he would keep me chained to the bed.They all laughed and I also laughed, pretending not to be shocked.All those stupid guys did notice they were losing a lot of money to the Boss… After several hours, they were almost passing out and then they decided to stop playing for the night. We all went to the bar, thinking the night was over, but they insisted I could stay a little while longer. They made me a fresh drink and some of them continued to talk to me about. She came after few minutes.She asked me to promise her that I will marry her and I promised. I took dairy milk and applied in her mouth and all over her face. Then I licked it over her face and I tasted a new flavor added by her face. She was shining in that dim light. I took back the chocolate from her mouth with the help of my tongue she too enjoyed it. I moved a bit to her neck and licked all the sweat over there. I took the sari from her shoulder two see her two Pepsi balls and a sweet.