And this may be a surprise, but the central character is not quite what she seems. First drafts are done through Chapter 7.(Tigger) What is your great...est strength as a writer, Brandy, and what area do you *think* need improvement?(ehayes) She needs to send more money to her collaborators! *Laughs*(Brandy) I think I can work out reasonable plots, though I still learn from every one of the Professor's stories.I think I need to work on making my characters more alive. Someone once said they were,. “I am just so delighted that you made your way across country to the high mountains and found our little city.”“You’ve told me before that you liked it here and wanted to stay a while and I’m really glad,” I continued while gazing into her innocent smile.“I want you to know that I think you are among the most beautiful young women ever to grace our fair city,” I said and noticed her begin to blush slightly.“Since you interviewed me in your second week in town, I have to admit that i’ve had a. I didn’t bother to fix it. We went into the spare bedroom where we wouldn’t feel as bad about the mess that was about to be made. I undressed, taking everything off except for my heels. The boys liked fucking me in my heels. I got on my knees as all six of them gathered around me in a circle. It was organized, almost ritualistic in nature. They all unzipped and took their pants off. I was surrounded by six cocks. Rodney’s was easily the biggest and thickest of the bunch, followed by Nick and. Her blue eyes filled with tears. "I can't remember! Why can't I remember?" Josh hugged her sobbing form. "There, there. There's no need to cry, eh?" He tilted her chin and brushed away her tears with his thumb. Summer just lay there, while Josh cuddled her. After a while, the flow of tears stopped. She shook herself out of a daze and noticed Josh had turned on the big screen TV. The two of them watched some simple cartoons for a while. It was a beautiful union. Josh had his arms around her.