Again feedback is appreciated. Please tell me how I might improve my writing, not just telling me you hate my writing. ***** ‘There’s Paul, gott...a go.’ ‘Have fun.’ Nina struggled to maintain her smile until her roommate Keri left. Nina was happy that Keri had found someone who made her happy, but she just wished that someone could be her. Nina had been in love with her roommate for months, not quite since they had moved in together a year ago. Nina had tried to broach the idea to Keri, but. She would be babysitting for them on Saturday night and would have a bedroom all to herself with a private bathroom.It was the prospect of some interesting nighttime activities that made her agree to the proposal more than the opportunity to make extra cash. She had become very attached to Mr. Griffin's cock after he used it to batter open her pussy and deprive her of her pretty little cherry. His follow-up impalement of her tightly clutched pucker hole made her totally submissive to his. She had unzipped Brenda’s dress and had let it fall open. Brenda, giving Devin room to pull her dress up and off of her body, leaving her there in just her bra, panties, stockings, and three-inch heels.Although Devin had pulled Brenda’s dress off, it was Brenda that was still controlling the action. She had pushed Devin back on the couch and was now lying on top of her. She was sucking a nipple as she continued to play with the other. All Devin was doing now was moaning at various levels. "No, nothing wrong" she answered.Megan took a spot on the edge of the bed beside her father. He couldn't help but notice the small little nightie she was wearing, almost see thru. "What's up sweety?" he asked."How old were you when you had sex the first time?" she asked, surprising her father."Well, I guess around 18, 19" he answered, "Why?" Well lately I've been getting these urges and I guess I just needed to know if it was normal or not" she explained. "Thanks Daddy" You're very welcome.