Only speak directly about feelings when talking about your POV character. Check out the little passage below.“Shelly was mortified. The look on Paul...a’s face was one of abject horror, while Jennifer seemed more angry than anything.”Here we’re writing from Shelly’s POV, so when we write about Paula and Jennifer’s emotions we find other ways to communicate them by providing Shelley’s perspective. An advantage of sticking to this rule is it makes pronouns a little bit stickier. Without another. .. I cum a lot so...”She laughed and held out her arms, “I hope so Samuel.”I moved onto the bed and over her. She guided my drooling cock to her pussy and I pushed. I groaned and closed my eyes in pleasure as my cock pushed into heaven. Emily hugged me and waited and I opened my eyes to see her smile. I had dreamed of this a thousand times and started to fuck her nice and slow.She shuddered and grunted when my cock hit her cervix and I stopped moving. Emily laughed and shook me, “It’s okay. One guy in our class committed suicide because his college debt was so overwhelming. I had scholarships and worked. I only owed a couple of thousand and that pays off next month. Dy and I have been lucky on the house. Her check from the drycleaners and careful spending have worked well. It's also good that we aren't fancy people."She's a great lady and I'm proud to have her love and to be her husband. I know it wasn't intentional but fortuitous accidents seem to surround Brit and you. I'm glad. “Stroke it! Jerk my fucking cock you little slut!” his words excited more than offended and I quickly wrapped my little hand around his massive girth and slowly jerked him. His body tensed up when he felt my tongue swirl around his balls and he moaned loudly when I sucked them both into my mouth.“You going to make me cum Lilly? Make me cum all over that pretty face?”“MMMMM fuck yes! I want every drop of you on me.” I moaned with a mouth full of balls.“MMMM I will….but not yet. Not until I get a.
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