As you can see, written several fairly negative comments down on my critique with regards to it too," I said pointing them out to her. She smiled at t...hat, flipped open the manuscript once again and sat back down on the couch making herself comfortable. All I could do was sit down at my desk trying to do the same as she continued on, reading and flipping through it."This part isn't too bad," she said smiling, once again reading. "His lips then circled my hard swollen clitoris, his tongue lashing. However, Jason felt he was going through the motions and foundhimself growing bored. He couldn't understand why this beautiful girlwas uninteresting. It wasn't as if he was looking for something deepeither. Jason was aware, if he were successful, this would be a one-night stand. Even with that thought in mind he couldn't bring himselfto be excited at the notion. When the music changed tempo, Mike pulledthe group to the dance floor.The mix of techno and the latest hit song was sending an. ‘I’m sorry, did I disturb you?’ She behaved as if nothing were out of the ordinary at all! Jacen stammered at first, unable to really make out any words. ‘I heard… a sound, I uh, wanted to make sure you were okay.’ It was then he noticed that Eryn wasn’t looking at his face so much as she was looking at something at her eye level from the bed. He glanced down, and saw that his arousal had become painfully obvious. ‘I’ve obviously intruded,’ Jacen said quickly, turning to hide his own. A couple of yards away one of his boarding crew was methodically stripping the armor and weapons from a Malshallian body. His movement caused the crewman to jump until he saw who had caused it."Ah there ye are, Armsman!" he chuckled. "We was wondering where ye ran off too. Got a bit interesting there for a while and we kind of lost track of ye." Ambling over he helped the still dazed Dent to his feet. "There now, well ye seem to be all in one piece but by the gods yer a mess! The deck here is.