I told her I'd be right back, and retireved my present from my car.Suddenely, I was scared. She was going to freak. I knew it.I handed her the box and... watched carefully as she opened it, ready with an excuse or an explination as soon as she saw it and went ballistic.Amazingly enough, that didn't happen. She read the card and smiled at me. (I'm sure that I'd have to explain it to her later...she was never a Shakespeare fan...) Then she folded back the tissue paper and saw what it was. Squealing,. If she didn’t get to bed then she would become the crabbiest apple of the apple tree. We watched the movie for about 30 minutes and then I turned on my laptop and started to play a game called Slender. She asked what I was doing and I told her that it’s a really scary game. I explained to her the objective of the game and how to play. She thought it sounded cool and wanted to watch me play. I turned the lights off and the volume all the way up as she sat down next to me. We started playing and. She felt his big muscular body twitch, as she gently caressed his sensitive prick through the material. Becoming more aroused, Adrian could feel her sticky hot pussy juices creaming around her finger as he worked it deeper into her dripping cunt.Quivering with anticipation, Alex slowly lowered his face to hers as she covered his lips with her hot open mouth her sweet moist tongue curling around his. Locked in a passionate kiss, the woman expertly lowered his fly, releasing his throbbing. The fun part about creating characters and maneuvering them through a story is allowing them to be themselves and, to a certain degree, be normal while still allowing for unusual and unexpected twists in the plot. And, of course, for steamy sex. Thanks to all, and any and all comments, even negative comments, are greatly appreciated. But please don’t just tell me the story sucks, tell me why you think it sucks. I’d also appreciate comments on which characters you like, dislike, are intrigued.