In writing this novel there are a couple of pitfalls I tried to avoid. I attempted to fully lay out Cecilia's personality and make it very clear why s...he needs to establish herself as the dominant partner at the beginning of her relationship with Jason. I also sought to explore the psychology of my other characters, in an effort to explain as clearly as I can what motivates my characters and why they do the things they do.In my novel I also strove to avoid the clichés I have seen in some other. He was completely shocked but took me in. He massaged my balls and sucked my cock better than any woman ever has. I reached down and Indio his pants. Letging his own hard cock out. I spit in my hand and wrapped it around him. Pumping my fist up and down. Without saying a word we both lay on our sides so we could suck each others cock at the same time. Mark clobbered all over me covering my hard on with spit. In one quick motion Mark was on his stomach, asking me to fuck him. I straddled him. His chest is hard with a little bit of hair in the center. He’s forty years old, but he could easily pass for a decade younger.Sensing that she wants to draw out this hug, Mat sets down his cup and wraps his other arm around her, holding her to him.“Are you ok?” he asks after a minute.“Yeah. I’m going to go to bed,” Abby says, sadness suddenly striking her.“Ok, sweetheart,” her dad says, trying to hide his worry as he watches her walk away. He doesn’t like when she isn’t herself. She’s usually. Of course it didn’t mean that we shot any straighter, as he could still say the other guy missed, but it was a step in the right direction at long last. And each of us swore an oath, that very day, to own at least one of these real six shooters. ‘Dunky, you better not swear, or I’ll tell mom,’ Bethy said poking her index finger into my right arm. ‘I’ve told you not to touch me!’ I yelled, furious at her for the millionth time. Bethy had to have the worse memory in the world as she was.