One person pointed out that I was being unrealistic on how long I was having my character hit a golf ball, the story was a fantasy but hey he was righ...t about it being unrealistic, and he had brought it up politely so no reason not to make a change. After making those corrections I reposted the story awaiting further comments and hoping for a few compliments.There were some attaboys and requests to keep writing, but another reader pointed out that my story would go better if it was a girl. "Are you OK? You took quite a tumble," I asked her."Yeah, not too bad. Just a little bumped and bruised." She brushed her clothes down. "Thanks for helping me up. My name's Vicky Miller." I'm Lexi. Lexi Jones," I said giving her a smile. By silent consent we began walking to our next lesson together, talking."Most people don't want to touch my arms. It freaks them out." Well, I must admit they did give me pause. Just gut reaction I guess, but they just feel like normal skin more or less.". But she didn't stop there, she kept on licking and sucking until my cock was fully erect and hard again and then said "I need some of hat".I stood up and took her in my arms kissing her deeply on the mouth. My hands found the zip of her dress and I slid it down and let the dress fall to the floor. I unclasped her bra and dropped it too and finally I slid her panties down her legs and she stepped out of them. I picked her up, and she was so light. I lay her on her examination table and leaning. This is the new friend i am here to meet. I get out of the car and bring my bag with me. We both say nothing as we walk out of the car park and start down on one of the trails that's leads to a large forest. As i walk i can feel the large DD breasts bounce up and down, i really hope we dont bump into anybody. My friend then pulls out her own ruby red lipstick and starts applying it to her lips, after she had done she slides her hand into my trousers and grabs my ass. However she does not remove.
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