She was a good conversationalist. We danced a bit and then went for another beer. Andrea found the orange juice in the refrigerator and decided a scre...w driver would hit the spot instead. Andrea enjoyed talking with my teammates and friends. We grabbed a spot on the couch when one opened up.We spent time cuddling and kissing. We made out for awhile. Andrea paused and said, "I'm parched. I'm going to go get another drink. Save our spot here." That's cool," I agreed."I'll get you a beer," Andrea. First with one hand than the other, spreading my lips open as he rubbed it. His one hand continued to play with my pussy, his other hand reached for my tits. He played with me this way, for about 5 minutes. I finally told him maybe he better stop, his dick was sticking out, he tried to hide it to no avail. I went to my bedroom and put on a robe, returning to the living room. He said he better leave and sell more cookies, I just smiled and pointed to his bulging pants. I said you can't go. Even Violet and Bree can become quite demanding after Erica and I return from a mission. It's one of the few problems for concubines. They need to know that you still need them. Not so much sexually, but emotionally.I guess that's the one part of the whole concubine system that I agree needs to be fixed. Our concubines have to trust that we'll always want them around, but it can't be just about sex. I think they instinctively know this because I've watched all of the concubines on Trinary. ‘In summary you’re all going to take what may be your first foray into writing erotic fiction—not romance novel stuff, but good solid steamy—even nasty—prose. Certainly romance is an important ingredient in writing about good sex but it’s how you get there that makes the difference between good fiction and recreational smut. All of the other elements which we have discussed in terms of character development and painting a picture are essential. On the other hand, we have to know—clearly.