Mary said okay baby, slow down, that cock in your ass isn’t going to go soft. I started slowing down and finally just stopped and set down on the t...oy. I was breathing hard and sweat was just rolling off my body. Mary allowed me a couple of seconds to catch my breath then told me to raise up and move between her legs. My ass was very tender but it was still such a thrill my body tingled all over and a few more drops of cum eased out of my cock. Mary notice this and laughed saying you. The biggest thing I learned while writing Rebellion is about characterization. Previously, I thought characterization meant having a unique voice, a personality, and having interesting things happen. I’m now much more aware of the need to both make characters somewhat relatable, and do have a character arc or story separate from the main narrative. This is going to be the main thing I work on during Elfish Descent. As an example, I am really not very satisfied with how the Katerei and Gorath. ’ ‘I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry a million times. Will that cover me for the rest of the day?’ ‘I’m not trying to fight with you,’ Dani said. ‘I’m not mad,’ Jason said, smiling. ‘I didn’t mean to sound mad, if I did. Of course everything will be all right. It has to be.’ ‘Why does it have to be?’ ‘Because if this was a story, Julie’d be the wicked witch. And everyone knows the wicked witch always bites it in the end.’ * * * ‘Of course we’ll be there,’ Dani’s mother told her. ‘Well, I will,. I had to work very hard at stopping any suspicions from running wild. This became more than apparent with Sergeant Jones’ refugees. There was an unspoken undercurrent among the crew and family that thought that they might have been involved in the mutiny.I started meeting with them informally. For the most part, the older members were in no condition to return to work. But they were aware of the animosity that was beginning to build against them. Then they solved the problem themselves. I was.