And Joan screamed.End of Part 1 of The total sissification of John Phillips.Epilogue:Beau Johnson walked to the front door, sparing a glance at Swanso...n andMarie, saying nothing. He left. He got into his car and went to hisoffice. He turned on his computer. He searched for an answer. And asolution.Authors note:All in all, my opinion, not bad for a first draft. I didn't know whereI wanted to take this, but I do know that I wanted to set a stage thatwould leave it wide open, never ending and full,. Eventually they break and go inside to play on some of the arcade games and eat. They share some pizza and a couple drinks before heading back out for a few more rounds of mini golf.As they play through the all the courses the place has to offer, Riko begins to get worse at her swings. Whereas she started off good before their break inside, she suddenly gets bad at it. Lars confronts her about it with a joke and she makes up an excuse, asking him to help her get back on track with her swings. I was lucky to have her for the short time we had together."By now, they were drawing close enough to the bikers ahead of them to be sure they were Kevin and Emily. Vicky kept moving and pulled the Stratus up alongside them and got a little wave from each of them, then went on to pass and pull into the right lane in front of them. "Sure would be nice to be going along with them," she said, changing the subject."It's an awful long way on a bike," he commented. "I only took a couple long trips. Emma was standing next to Simon, waiting to hear what they would be doing next. Laura sat next to Paul, the poor boy probably hyperventilating at having the super Amazon sitting so close to him. Bonnie stood alone, leaning against a wall, arms folded. Just looking. ‘Now, I’ve told most of you the story in bits in pieces, but I’ll tell you now again so that we all know what’s going on. It’s a bit long winded and complex, so when I finish, could someone please explain it to Carl again.’ They all.
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